honest opinions fellas

been dicking around with music on and off mainly as a hobby. really proud of this jam, though.

waddya guys think?

https://soundcloud.com/crucial56/cleave-damage

The repetitive beat was on purpose, wanted to keep a hypnotic pounding beat goin. Guess I enforced it a little too much.

After listening to it a few more times I can see a some flaws. Finished it last night and thought it sounded pretty dope at the time.

I like it, monolithic beat and all.

“Honest opinions…”
Does anybody here give anything other than?
I agree with the whoever said throw a guitar in there even if it’s just a power chord that sounds all synthed out

I like it.

Would like some guitar in there. You could go psychedelic rifs or funky or metal or all three. Not completely through out, not forced, just in parts for variance.

if i wasn’t a lazy ass i should have just downloaded it and add the guitar myself. wouldn’t take long. then repost for fun. :smiley:

but fuck it. i’m taking the day off. i’m drinkin. cheers.

Thanks a lot for your input, fellas.

As for adding guitars, it would just create a whole different animal as to what I’m trying to do.

Would definitely like to work with guitars in the future though.

I like it.

Would like some guitar in there. You could go psychedelic rifs or funky or metal or all three. Not completely through out, not forced, just in parts for variance.

if i wasn’t a lazy ass i should have just downloaded it and add the guitar myself. wouldn’t take long. then repost for fun. :smiley:

but fuck it. i’m taking the day off. i’m drinkin. cheers.

I’d like to hear what you can do with it if you’re up for it. Haha.

Thanks a lot for your input, fellas.

As for adding guitars, it would just create a whole different animal as to what I’m trying to do.

Would definitely like to work with guitars in the future though.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cbPzcyPn8P4

The guitar doesn’t have to be as pronounced as it is in this song, but I think a power chord like this dropped in your song sporadically here and there woudn’t take away anything from your song.
kinda how the guitar is AFTER the first 15 or so seconds

Yea i see what your talking about. Cubanate is another band who blended guitar and heavy beats really well. I’d like to do something like that in the future.